Norman Etherington. The
Annotated She: A Critical Edition of H.Rider Haggard's Victorian Romance with
Introduction and Notes. The Visions Series. Bloomington: Indiana UP.
xliv+241. $37.50
In recent years the term "critical edition" has most frequently been applied to books
that reproduce a text together with a number of critical essays, often with little
attention paid to the authority of the text reproduced. For SF the most notorious of such
editions is Frank McConnell's The Time Machine/The War of the Worlds (1977),
which David Y. Hughes excoriated in SFS #12 (July 1977) both for the ignorance displayed
by the editor in his introduction and notes and for the choice of defective copy-texts,
remarking "all they [McConnell and Oxford UP] had to do to avoid virtually any chance for
error was to reproduce the text Wells intended them to, that of the Atlantic Edition"
(4:196). Harry M. Geduld, general editor of the Visions series, when preparing The
Definitive Time Machine, followed Hughes' advice, for which he was in his turn
blasted in SFS #46 by David Lake, who, although he had once agreed that the AE text was
definitive, had later demonstrated that Wells made additional revisions for the
publication of the story in The Scientific Romances (1933). Having found a number
of instances in which Geduld's text fails to follow AE exactly (primarily the fault of the
proofreader, who presumably failed to the compare the texts word-for-word, rather than
that of the editor, unless the two were one, though secondarily of the editor, who should
have made certain that proper procedures were followed; but who am I, as a
far-from-perfect compositor and proofreader, to make such judgments?) and being somewhat
critical of Geduld's notes and appendices, Lake concluded his essay with harsh words:
"I
think, in the light of all the above, Hughes's summary judgment on McConnell applies to Geduld also: he botched it" (15:373). Although I agree wholeheartedly with Hughes on
McConnell, I feel that Lake is a bit too harsh on Geduld, whose book is valuable, and far
superior to McConnell's, in its introduction, notes, and appendices, which make up 155 of
its 218 pages.
Hughes, Lake, and Geduld all apparently accept the theory that a copy-text should be
the author's final version. I disagree, though perhaps only in defining the term
"final." That is to say, I distrust an author's second thoughts, especially when they
come many years later. For me the "final" version of The Time Machine, and the
proper copy-text, is the London edition of 1895. Revisions made for editions as remote
from the original as as 1924 and 1933 are from 1895 might well be termed postfinal and
treated by an editor in the same way as variations from the copy-text in the versions that
preceded it.
Norman Etherington can hardly be faulted in any way (if we can assume perfect
proofreading) for his handling of the text of She, his copy-text being the
"New
Edition" of 1888 in which "Approximately four hundred minor corrections and emendations
were made to orthography, punctuation, and individual words" of the first printing of the
first edition of 1887 (xxii). His procedure for dealing with earlier versions differed
from what is (or was) the normal procedure in ways made possible by the modern computer:
First the text of the Graphic serialization was typed into a computer. The
text of the first edition was then correlated with the manuscript, and the results were
used to change the Graphic text. Finally, the changes of 1888 were interpolated,
excluding only mistakes in punctuation and orthography. This procedure has required more
reading and rereading than would ordinarily be the case, but working backward from the
text of 1888 might not have brought to light the most significant of the author's
emendations. (xxiii)
If the edition that results can be faulted in any way, it is perhaps in Etherington's
limiting himself to annotating "significant" emendations, though in this regard I can
can cite only one instance: the failure to quote the text of the "manuscript version of
chapter VII [which] strongly implies that Leo slept with...Ustane" (xx). Since it seemed
obvious to me, when I was writing about Haggard, that Leo did that very thing (see Riverside
Quarterly 6.2 [April 1974]: 136), I would like now to see the manuscript passage
whose deletion has apparently persuaded Etherington that Leo refused the advances of the
temptress.
Aside from quibblings about what is or is not significant and some differences of
interpretation and evaluation, I can find no fault with Etherington's introduction and
annotations. His knowledge of Haggard and his times seems complete, or at least sufficient
to task at hand (he has also published a book and two articles on Haggard), as well as his
knowledge of earlier critical work (even though he omits, perhaps properly, any reference
to my RQ essay). Finally, this essential work for anyone studying Haggard appears in a
handsomely printed and bound volume of 295 pages, well worth its price, especially if one
compares it with other books reviewed in this issue of SFS.
-- RDM
Starmont, Borgo, and the English
Association
- Nicholas Ruddick. Christopher
Priest.
- Stephen R. Dziemianowicz. The
Annotated Guide to Unknown & Unknown Worlds
- Steve Behrends. Clark Ashton
Smith.
- Raymond Z. Gallun with Dr. Jeffrey M. Elliott. Starclimber: The Literary Adventures and Autobiography of Raymond Z.
Gallun
- Beverly Lyon Clark. Lewis Carroll
- Scott Alan Burgess. The Work of
Dean Ing: An Annotated Bibliography and Guide
- Tom Shippey, ed., for the English Association. Fictional Space: Essays on Contemporary Science Fiction
Nicholas Ruddick. Christopher
Priest. Starmont Reader's Guide #50. Mercer Island, WA: Starmont
House, 1989. ix+104. $19.95 boards, $9.95 paper
Christopher Priest, now in his fiftieth year, has been publishing SF since 1966. He was
closely identified with the New Wave in the 1970s, and indeed may have been first to use
that term in SF criticism (3), and has been a frequent contributor to Foundation
since 1973. His novels and stories have all been serious and literate; they have been (in
the SF press) widely reviewed, and some of them have won SF awards. By 1989 it was
certainly high time for a book on Priest's work in such a series as the Starmont Reader's
Guides.
Ruddick's book was one of those in a box I received from Professor Elkins last fall
upon becoming SFS book-review editor. The others I placed without much trouble, but I had
to make fifteen telephone calls before I could find a North American scholar who not only
recognized Priest's name but also felt familiar enough with his work to review the book;
whether this indicates that Priest is less highly regarded in the US and Canada than in
the UK, I cannot say. The reviewer I finally found has not met his commitment, so that it
is also high time for a review of Ruddick's book in SFS.
The book has the standard SRG format: Chronology, Biocritical Introduction, a chapter
on each of the novels and one on the short stories, and an annotated bibliography. Priest
himself reviewed the book in the Autumn 1990 issue of Foundation: "It
is...remarkably free of factual errors, his reading of CP's books and stories is close,
sympathetic and well argued, and overall it is intelligently put together and highly
readable, with a minimum of academic jargon" (#50:94). I have no quarrel with Ruddick's
treatment of three of the four books by Priest I have read--Inverted World
(1974), A Dream of Wessex (1977; US title, A Perfect Lover), and An
Infinite Summer(1979; short stories)--and certainly none with Priest's discussion of
them in his review, the finest self-critique of an SF author known to me. But the fourth
book is a different matter.
It seems to me that Priest is ill-fitted and never comfortable while wearing the
persona of Edward Turnbull, the narrator of The Space Machine: A Scientific Romance,
which is offered us as a homage to H.G. Wells. The narrative voice, intentionally
un-Wellsian, is also un-Priestian. The style, presumably intended to reflect that of
Victorian popular fiction, is awkward and flat and so reflects that fiction at its worst
rather than its best. The development of the relationship between hero and heroine is
unpersuasive: that Edward should be attracted to Amelia is understandable, but not that
she should be attracted to him. More important, this book, an account of events
supplementary to those depicted in The Time Machine and The War of the Worlds,
"represents," in the words of Brian M. Stableford, "a gross misunderstanding of Wells's
work" (Foundation #11 [March 1977]: 55), not least, one may add, in its depiction
of Wells as heroic warrior and philosophical optimist. Also to be regretted are Ruddick's
absurd statements that "Wells at thirty was a primitive as far as his literary education
was concerned" and that "Priest is...far more consciously a literary writer than Wells
ever was" (35).
Even so, Priest is one of the best contemporary SF writers, and Ruddick's book one of
the best in the Starmont series.
Stephen R. Dziemianowicz. The Annotated Guide to Unknown & Unknown
Worlds. Starmont Studies in Literary Criticism #13. Mercer Island, WA:
Starmont House, 1991. 212p. $25.95 boards, $14.95 paper
In the 1920s Street and Smith was by far the largest of the pulp-magazine publishers,
with four weeklies, four semi-monthlies, and four or five monthlies. In the 1930s new
publishers entered the field with mass-production techniques in editing as well as
printing; they flooded the newsstands with monthly, bi-monthly, and quarterly titles so
that while the total circulation of the pulps increased, per-issue circulations went into
a drastic decline, with returns running 40 or 50 percent. During the war, magazines could
sell all the copies they could print, and the total pulp-magazine circulation reached
unprecedented heights. Street and Smith, having more profitable use for its paper
allotment in non-pulp titles, converted its weeklies and semi-monthlies into monthlies and
killed most of its pulp titles; the last reported total for the S&S group was 274,027
for five titles in 1948 (The N.W. Ayer and Sons Directory of Newspapers and
Periodicals, 1949), of which perhaps half was for Astounding Science Fiction,
the one pulp not abandoned by the firm in 1949.
Astounding was perhaps the most profitable of the S&S pulps as early as
the late thirties, and John W. Campbell by that time was perhaps the only pulp-magazine
editor of any stature left in the firm; it was therefore not unreasonable for him to have
been given four years, 1939-1943, in which to bring a new magazine to profitability,
something that would surely not have been done for any other editor or by any other
pulp-magazine firm of the period. Though profitability was evidently never achieved, Unknown,
renamed Unknown Worlds in 1941, found a readership whose enthusiasm has hardly
abated in the ensuing half-century.
The first third of this book is devoted to a history of the magazine, a discussion of
its fiction in general terms, and a discussion of its influence on later fantasy and SF.
The middle third presents issue-by-issue, story-by-story notes and comment. Appendices
make up the last third: lists of accepted but never published manuscripts, stories
transferred to Astounding, dates on which the stories were purchased, stories
published in the UK edition; indexes to the stories, the authors, and
letters-to-the-editor; and finally a list of the stories reprinted from the magazine, with
publication data. All this (which amounts to much the fullest treatment I know of any pulp
magazine) was made possible by the existence of the Street and Smith Collection at
Syracuse University. One wonders whether that collection contains such information as
would make it possible to ascertain things like word-rates paid to authors or the
circulations of individual magazines in the S&S group.
Steve Behrends. Clark
Ashton Smith. Starmont Reader's Guide #49. Mercer Island: WA, 1990.
vi+112. $19.95 boards, $9.95 paper
For 52 years, from the time he was nine until his marriage at 61 in 1954, Clark Ashton
Smith, lived in a cabin near the small town of Auburn in northern California, with his
parents until their deaths in the mid-'30s and thereafter alone. His schooling ended with
the grades. Except for a few brief visits to San Francisco, he seems never to have left
the Auburn area, devoting himself to reading, writing, and painting and sculpture (in
which he was entirely self-taught). He won a measure of fame at 19 with the publication in
1912 of The Star Treader and Other Poems, which was followed by poems in Poetry,
Smart Set, The Yale Review. Four of his stories, characterized by
Behrends as "contes cruels (biting) with Oriental themes" (5), had earlier appeared in The
Overland Monthly and Black Cat.
"Sadly, this literary notoriety [sic] did little to change what Smith saw as his dull
and tedious life" (6). During the years 1913-1921 he was in very poor health and
published nothing. In 1922 and 1925 he had new collections of his poetry printed as
booklets by the local newspaper. In 1927 he began, but apparently never finished, a
translation of Les Fleurs du Mal; later that year some of his paintings were
exhibited at the Salon des Independents in New York City. (Whether and were any sold, or
mentioned by critics, we are not told.)
From such elite publications as Poetry, Smart Set, and The Yale Review,
it was in 1928 a long way down to the garish Weird Tales. But Smith had been in
correspondence with H.P. Lovecraft since 1922, and it was presumably through Lovecraft's
encouragement that "Three Poems in Prose by Charles P. Baudelaire" was published in the
August issue of Weird Tales, followed by a story, "The Ninth Skeleton," in its
September issue. When in 1929 a girl friend demanded that he cease being idle, he decided
to try to earn money by writing (7). During the next four years he sold about 100 stories
to Weird Tales and the SF pulps. In 1932, outraged by the way Hugo Gernsback had
mutilated one of his stories, he ceased to write for Wonder Stories, previously
his most receptive SF market, and by the end of that year had almost entirely abandoned
the writing of fiction. The extreme poverty in which he lived ended with his marriage, his
wife having a house in Pacific Grove and a monthly Social Security income of $106.00.
In 1933 Smith had a collection of his stories printed by the local newspaper. Four
volumes of his short stories and two of his poetry were published by Arkham House before
his death in 1961. Since then fan and paperback publishers have gathered all or almost all
of his work into books, including reproductions of his paintings. His following, if much
smaller than that of Lovecraft or Howard, is still considerable. Behrends' purpose in this
SRG volume is "to provide a spring-board for future Smith scholarship, and also to
present little-known information and obscure material by Smith whenever opportunities
arose to do so" (20). For scholars interested in studying the life and work of the most
dedicated artist among SF writers, Behrends' book is perhaps the best place to start.
Raymond Z. Gallun with Dr. Jeffrey M. Elliott. Starclimber: The Literary Adventures and Autobiography of Raymond Z.
Gallun. Borgo Bioviews #1. San Bernardino, CA: Borgo Press, 1901.
168pp. $24.95 cloth, $14.95 paper
Given the somewhat similar circumstances of their childhood, and that they both wrote
SF and had problems with Hugo Gernsback, the lives, careers, and writings of two authors
could hardly differ in more ways than those of Clark Ashton Smith and Raymond Z. Gallun.
Gallun was born in 1911 in a small town in Wisconsin. His parents were working-class
people, somewhat eccentric, but solid citizens; he himself from an early age worked in a
cannery and at odd jobs. His interest in science developed from reading through a large
number of college-level textbooks left in the attic of his parents' house by a former
owner. He decided to become a writer while reading the Martian stories of Edgar Rice
Burroughs, for a writer could be anybody he wanted to be for as long as he liked, and then
somebody else (18). At 15, in 1926, he discovered Amazing Stories. At his high
school a short story was required in junior and senior English toward the end of the
academic year. For junior English in 1927 he wrote "The Crystal Ray"; his teacher gave
him A-. In senior English in 1928 he earned an A without the minus for "The Space
Dwellers" and thereupon sent both stories to Amazing. They were eventually
published, not in Amazing, but after some typical Gernsback chicanery, in the
November 1929 issues of Science Wonder Stories and Air Wonder Stories.
Having worked a year in a shoe factory and saved some money, he entered to the
University of Wisconsin in 1929. His intention was to work his way through, but the
attractions of life away from home were such that he squandered his savings in mildly
riotous living and never got around to looking for part-time employment. In his
composition class, stories from The American Mercury were offered as models.
"I
tried, but it was hard for me to bend my wits in their direction" (40). During the summer
of 1930 he worked in the cannery, and in September, having decided against college, he
returned to the shoe factory and the pursuit of a career in SF. After three years in which
his stories were accepted and published by Gernsback but not paid for, he finally found a
home in Astounding Stories, which during the 1930s published 32 of his stories.
Always a provident young man, he now had money sufficient for vacations in New Orleans
and, in 1938, for passage from that city to Europe. In Paris, while continuing to write,
he found employment teaching English to refugees from Germany. After visits to Germany,
Switzerland, and Italy, war having finally come in 1939, he joined the crew of a steamship
in Bordeaux for passage to New York.
From then until the mid-'50s his life was one of working at this job or that by day
(often physical labor) and writing for the pulps by night (once or twice he made the
slicks), relieved by frequent journeys in the USA and abroad. He was known in the SF world
as an idea man; much of this book is devoted to detailing the scientific concepts around
which he constructed his stories. As might be expected, his best stories are those in
which the concept dominates the narrative (e.g. "Seeds of the Dusk," Astounding,
June 1938; in a number of anthologies) and his poorest those given over to melodramatic
action. In the late 1950s, weary of a life of hard work at low pay, he became a technical
writer for a corporation, a job that he held for eleven years, writing only when the
spirit moved him. For twelve years his writing was devoted primarily to a novel of 1450
pages about the life of an SF writer, "Too long to be commercially viable" (127). All
but forgotten by the SF world, his recent stories and novels (including Skyclimber,
1981) all but ignored by SF critics, he now in his eighties longs one last success.
Except for a three-page introduction, this book is a straight first-person account of
Gallun's life. Why then is it attributed to "Raynond Z. Gallun with Dr. Jeffrey M.
Elliot"? The style is colloquial, conversational (many paragraphs beginning with
"No, I
didn't"); perhaps it was talked into a recorder and later heavily edited by Dr. Elliot
(whose name as editor or collaborator always appears with the honorific). Be that as it
may, this brief autobiography is interesting enough to make me imagine that I would
attempt to read the 1450-page autobiographical novel if a copy were at hand.
Beverly Lyon Clark. Lewis
Carroll. Starmont Reader's Guide #47. Mercer Island, WA: Starmont
House, 1990. viii+96. $19.95 boards, $9.95 paper. It may be possible to write a book on
Lewis Carroll of special interest to SF scholars; this book does not attempt that task.
Its value as a study of the author I am not qualified to judge.
Scott Alan Burgess. The
Work of Dean Ing: An Annotated Bibliography and Guide. Bibliographies
of Modern Authors #11. San Bernardino, CA: Borgo Press, 1990. 82p. $19.95 cloth, $9.95
paper
This book follows the format of the series as detailed in SFS #53 (March 1991): 151-53.
Dean Ing, with degrees in speech and a doctorate in communications theory, seems to have
minored in engineering, or to have made himself something of an engineer while in the Air
Force and during later employment with aircraft firms. In the years 1962-65 he designed
and built (in his back yard, as it were) "the Mayan Magnum, a state-of-the-art automobile
which was featured at numerous auto shows in the late 1960s and early 70s" (13), an
accomplishment that lends substance to his vividly expressed contempt for US auto makers,
US industry in general, and the soft-living, wealth-worshipping American society. People,
he says, should have status not for what they own but for what they have accomplished.
With respect to the Mayan Magnum, "most idolaters gave me status for buying the
bloody thing"(72).
Dean Ing is a man with a mission. In 1977 he resigned the professorial position he had
held for three years in order to devote himself entirely to writing. Since then, through
1990, in addition to numerous magazine stories and articles, he has written 14 books (six
SF novels, two spy thrillers, one story and one essay collection, and five collections in
which SF stories are mingled with essays on related topics), all or almost all devoted to
themes also propounded in three non-fiction books of which he was editor or co-author: High
Frontier by General Daniel Graham (1983), a book supporting Reagan's
"strategic defense initiative," Mutual Assured Survival, with Jerry Pournelle (1984), and The
Future of Flight, with Leik Myrabo (1985). He has also edited and/or completed seven
novels derived from manuscripts by Mack Reynolds, who died in 1983. The last book in
Burgess's list is a half-book: Silent Thunder bound with Heinlein's "Universe"
and scheduled for June 1991, but not yet received in Terre Haute as this is being written
(July 10th).
On social, economic, and political matters, I find myself in full agreement with what
Ing has to say in conversation with Burgess (5-11) and in his Afterword, "Excuse the
Shouting" (71-74)--with his diagnosis of present-day ills, that is. And one could hardly
disagree with the fundamental messages (self-reliance and social responsibility) that he
wishes to convey through his fictions (95% entertainment, 5% message [9]). On the other
hand, I am largely in disagreement with the politics of High Frontier and Mutual
Assured Survival, and entirely so with his literary aesthetic as indicated by his
choice of the thriller as the basic model for his SF. The three stories in Anasazi(1980),
perhaps the least typical of his books, contain many good things, but each is vitiated by
the bang-bang action of its resolution, not to mention the spiritualism (in SF terms, the
psi stuff) that eventuates in a conclusion similar to that of Heinlein's I Will Fear
No Evil.
Tom Shippey, ed., for the English Association.
Fictional Space: Essays on Contemporary Science Fiction.
Essays and Studies 1990 (#43). Oxford: Basil Blackwell, & Atlantic Highlands, NJ:
Humanities Press, 1991. vii+227. $70.00
This volume seems to be offered as an introduction to contemporary SF for college
professors of English and thus is on a more sophisticated level than the "Welcome Mats
for Newcomers" that I reviewed in our November 1990 issue. Shippey's preface, "Learning
to Read Science Fiction," is quite good, and the seven essays (by John R.R. Christie,
John Huntington, Robert Crossley, Shippey, Alasdair Spark, Alan C. Elms, and our own
Walter E. Meyers) are all of the quality one would expect from these well-known scholars.
I do not know what the membership dues of the English Association are, though I imagine
that they are reasonable and that they include the annual volumes of the Essays and
Studies series, but why any non-member would pay $70.00 for this volume I cannot imagine.
--RDM
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